We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son, Tomxxxxxxx, to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimarySchool. Like most parents in Hong Kong, we are facing a challenge inselecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited yourschool during the school open day in March. We are impressed by thestudents academic achievements & the confidence shown in theirdemonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly, Tom, justa primary five student showed his interest in participating in thevarious games arranged by your students. When we left your school, Tomtold us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC SecondarySchool.
From March till now, Tom has been working on his own initiative and hedid prove his desirability of becoming your student. Not only did heget a remarkable result for the school examination, he also managed toobtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose hisschools academic reports and the said reference letter for yourconsideration and hope that you would return us with an applicationform and grant Tom an opportunity for interview.
Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need furtherinformation, please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666(Mother).